Author: Jubilee Anderson

  • Lines of Courage

    Lines of Courage

    By Jennifer Nielsen

    Lines of Courage cover

    Book Review by Jubilee Anderson

    In the midst of the battles of World War I, five young people from five different countries must pick up lines of courage and face their own enemy: fear. Rising above expectation, they will bond together despite the heated air between their nations.

    As the title states, Lines of Courage has themes of courage, friendship, and coming of age.

    I picked up Lines of Courage at the library after a friend told me she liked Nielsen’s historical fictions. Of all the historical fiction books by Nielsen, this one was my favorite. I was so amazed at how she wove each character’s story and brought it full circle at the end! I would give Lines of Courage four stars.

    CONTENT: Shooting (not graphic)
    TAKEAWAYS: Lines of Courage resonated with me for two reasons. First, it was a display of how young people can join together and stand up for what’s right. Second, it was an exhortation to be bold and courageous.

    As a Christian, I believe that it is God who gives me courage and boldness to stand up for what’s right. God tells Joshua in Joshua 1:9, “Have I not commanded you? Be strong and courageous. Do not be frightened, and do not be dismayed, for the Lord your God is with you wherever you go.” This is why we can have courage. Because our God is with us.

    Have you read Lines of Courage? What about Jennifer Nielsen’s fantasy thriller, The False Prince? Tell me about it here!

  • Race to the End of the World

    Race to the End of the World

    by A.L. Tait

    Race to the End of the World cover

    Book Review by Jubilee Anderson

    Quinn is a farm boy, content with his quiet life, when suddenly he is chosen to participate in a race to the end of the world: a race in which he must be the first to draw a map of the entire world. He faces great challenges, including strange sea creatures and natives who want to kill him, but the greatest challenge of all is yet to come…

    With themes of forgiveness, friendship, self-control, coming-of-age, courage, and maturity, this upper middle grade thriller fantasy is a perfect gift for your pre-teen boy.

    I was pressured into borrowing The Mapmaker Chronicles from some good friends of ours. (Hence, why they were pressuring me.) I already had a stack of books and thought I didn’t need anymore. Apparently, I was wrong. 

    The themes connected to me so much. The line that stuck with me the most was, “You cannot change what others do. You can only change how you react to those things.” And I thought, “That’s so true!” The story leaned heavily on luck, but it wasn’t enough to stop me from giving Race to the End of the World 4 stars. 

    TAKEAWAYS: As I said before, I loved the theme of controlling one’s actions. I would like to add that as a Christian, I believe it takes God to change our hearts to not only be able to control our actions, but also to forgive. I wish Quinn had forgen his rivals instead of smiling at their misfortunes at the end. It’s not about what we can muster, it’s about what God changes in us to forgive even when they don’t deserve it.

    Have you read Race to the End of the World? What were your thoughts? Let me know here!

  • Analyzing: Return of the Jedi

    Analyzing: Return of the Jedi

    Return of the Jedi cover

    Return of the Jedi: Star Wars OG #3

    Analyzer: Jubilee Anderson

    This post includes spoilers!

    A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away….

    The Imperial forces have begun constructing a new, bigger, and more powerful Death Star than the one Luke destroyed in A New Hope. After rescuing Han Solo from imprisonment, Luke flies back to the Jedi Master Yoda to complete his training. Yoda tells him that the only way for him to become a Jedi is to face his father and kill him. After the death of his beloved master, Luke joins his friends in their mission to destroy the new Death Star. But not far into the journey, he realizes his presence is severely jeopardizing his friends’ safety.

    Return of the Jedi includes themes of good vs. evil, manhood, and loyalty. Luke not only faces hatred and overcomes it, but he brings someone else with him back to the Light Side.

    My Thoughts

    If the last movie did a good job of stirring up Luke’s internal conflict between hatred and love and giving in to his father’s request, this movie is even better. I have so many favorite scenes from this movie. The interaction between C3PO and the ewoks was so funny! It was really sweet when Luke reveals the truth to Leia about their identity, and I love the tension in the final scenes between Luke, Darth Vader, and Palpatine. This is the most touching of all the movies by far, and a neat wrap-up to the original Star Wars trilogy.

    Content Labels: Mild violence, romantic tension including several instances of kissing. The beginning scenes show women scantily clad, with only a bikini on. This is the major reason I’d give Return of the Jedi a 3 star instead of 4, and while it was effective to the plot, it was also very distracting.

    For Ye Writers!

    Character Arcs

    To recap, Luke’s Goal is to be a Jedi, and his Want is to be like his father. In the last movie, Luke overcame his pride and realized that he, too, could be subject to the Dark Side. 

    He also learned that his father was not actually the good man he had envisioned. But Luke still has this vision of what a good man looks like based upon who he thought his father was before he learned the truth. So let’s follow the major plot points through Luke’s character arc as he fully solidifies what it truly means to be a hero, and ultimately, a man.

    In Return of the Jedi, the call to action happens when Yoda tells Luke that he must kill his father to become a Jedi. Luke doesn’t accept this call to action right away. He doesn’t want to kill his father.

    With hope and yearning for his father to change to the Light Side, Luke eventually surrenders himself to the stormtroopers in order to try to convince Darth Vader to turn back. But Vader refuses, delivering Luke to Emperor Palpatine.

    Palpatine places Luke by a window to watch the destruction of the Rebel forces and the deaths of his friends. This is Luke’s final chance to resist hatred, but Palpatine lures him in. Luke battles Darth, but then realizes that he’s falling to the Dark Side just like his father did. He throws down his lightsaber. Enraged, Palpatine electrocutes Luke, but Darth Vader steps in front, sacrificing his life for Luke and becoming the man Luke originally imagined his father to be. 

    While Luke is certainly changed, there is a larger contrast between Darth Vader at the beginning and Darthat the end of the movie. Darth Vader at the beginning is a tyrant, but also somewhat a slave, willingly obeying Palpatine’s command. At the end, he dies for his son, overcoming his hatred in love and defeating Palpatine.

    As I mentioned in the analyzation of The Empire Strikes Back, there are three types of characters necessary to a positive change arc: the protagonist, a character stuck in the evil the protagonist wants to avoid, and a character already living the virtue the protagonist wants to achieve.

    Last time we discussed several options for the vice in this movie and we decided upon either hatred or pride (RotJ seems to lean heavier on the hatred aspect whereas the TESB seemed to lean more towards the pride aspect). 

    At this point, Luke has already overcome his pride, and now he must face the temptation to hatred and overcome it. Again, he must choose; will he follow the path of Obi Wan and Yoda? Or will he fall to the Dark Side and join Palpatine and Darth Vader? 

    Luke not only overcomes this temptation, he brings his father along with him to the Light Side.

    Plot Structure

    Take a look at the more in-depth analyzation of The Empire Strikes Back here on K.M. Weiland’s website.

    Characteristic Mom: Luke is back in Tatooine. They set out to rescue Han and succeed.

    Inciting Event: On his deathbed, Yoda tells Luke that the only way to become a Jedi is to face his father.

    Push Point: Luke joins his friends in their mission to destroy the Death Star’s shield, but regrets it when he realizes Darth Vader can sense him with the force.

    Pinch Point: Han and Leia run into Storm Troopers on Endor. Emperor Palpatine sets a trap for the Rebel ships coming to blow up the new Death Star.

    Midpoint: The Ewoks lead the Rebels to the shield generator on Endor. Luke reveals to Leia that Darth Vader is his father. He surrenders to the Empire and they take him to Darth Vader.

    Pinch Point: Luke fails to convince Darth Vader to turn from the dark side. “You underestimate the power of the dark side.”

    Lowpoint: Leia and Han are trapped by the storm troopers. Luke watches the Rebel ships being destroyed. He gives in to the temptation and fights his father. Luke cuts off Vader’s hand just like Vader cut off Luke’s hand. If Luke goes any further, he will become Darth Vader himself.

    Climax: Luke resists the temptation to give in to his anger and ultimately the Dark Side. He almost dies, but Darth Vader kills the Emperor, sacrificing his life and saving Luke. When Luke defeats his temptation, he becomes a Jedi knight and figuratively he becomes a man.

    Resolution: Everyone celebrates. Luke cremates Vader’s remains. He later sees his force ghost father Anakin beside his mentors Obi Wan and Yoda.

    Closing

    I hope this review/analyzation of Return of the Jedi has helped you see how plot, characters, and theme are tightly interwoven, and hopefully you can impliment some of these things in your own story. You can find the analyzations for movies 1 & 2 here and here.

  • Analyzing: The Empire Strikes Back

    Analyzing: The Empire Strikes Back

    The Empire Strikes Back cover

    The Empire Strikes Back: Star Wars OG #2

    Analyzer: Jubilee Anderson

    Remember, this post includes spoilers!

    A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away….

    When his old mentor’s ghost tells Luke to go to another planet to train under a Jedi Master named Yoda, Luke immediately obeys. At the same time, the Rebel base is attacked, and Luke’s friends are forced to flee. Will Luke finish his training in time to face the evil lord, Darth Vader, or will his friends be killed by Vader’s forces?

    The Empire Strikes Back has themes of good vs. evil, loyalty, and romance.

    My Thoughts

    In the last post we talked about movie 1, A New Hope. Now I’m back to talk about the second movie.

    I heard a lot of spoilers before watching this movie, sadly, including one of the best plot twists in movie history. When I finally watched it, it was exactly how I expected. I was so shocked at meeting Yoda, I wondered if Luke had really found the right guy! I was really sad for Han and Leia, and I loved Luke’s character arc especially during the last half of the movie.

    I know I said this last time, but it’s true: George Lucas is a master storyteller!

    Content Labels: Romantic tension between characters, including multiple instances of kissing. 

    Takeaways: The ending of this movie was suspenseful, with some loose ends not tied until the third movie. I really, really loved Luke and Vader’s character arcs and relationship as protagonist and villain. I loved the theme of fighting for what’s right and watching how Luke overcame his lies and fears to embrace this truth.

    For Ye Writers!

    Character Arcs

    (Remember: this is a study of how Luke changes over the course of the movie. Also, lots of spoilers here! DON’T READ THIS IF YOU HAVEN’T WATCHED IT!!!)

    To recap from the last movie, Luke wants to “be a Jedi like my father”, by which he means that he wants to be like his father. So Luke has a Goal: to become a Jedi; and a Want: to become the honorable man his father was, willing to sacrifice for good. Now he just needs to get there. 

    In this movie, Luke accepts the call to action to become a Jedi when Obi Wan tells him to train under Yoda. When Luke first meets Yoda, he treats him with disrespect and impatience. He thinks he has it all figured out. But overtime, he learns to respect Yoda. 

    One day, Yoda sends him to fight Darth Vader, and Luke cuts off Vader’s head. He realizes it was all just a vision, and he looks into Vader’s mask. Inside is a reflection of a face that looks like his. Luke realizes that he could turn to the dark side if he does not guard himself from temptation. 

    He is faced with himself again at the climax, but this time in a different way. After cutting off Luke’s hand, Darth Vader reveals that he is Luke’s father. Vader tempts Luke to join the dark side, but Luke has learned his lesson. He doesn’t give in, but instead throws himself into the pit.

    At the beginning of the movie, Luke thought he knew how to be a Jedi and how to resist evil temptation. He was ignorant and stubborn. But in the end, he truly resists temptation and overcomes it. He actually knows this time and he’s willing to learn instead of ignorantly going on his way.

    In a story there are three main characters necessary to the plot of a positive change arc: The protagonist is the changing character. In The Empire Strikes Back, this character is Luke. Darth Vader (villain) is the one stuck in the evil Luke is trying to avoid, and Obi Wan Kenobi (mentor) is a perfect example of an impact character, or one actively living the virtue Luke is trying to achieve. 

    You may be asking, what evil is Luke trying to avoid? It was difficult to pinpoint an exact vice, but I came down to two. 

    The first one was pride. There are several hints that this is the vice throughout the movie. At the beginning, Luke thinks he has it all figured out and can resist evil on his own. Long before that, in the first movie, Darth Vader force chokes a man for telling him there is something wrong with his ship. These are instances of pride, but there isn’t a clear indication of humility from either Obi Wan or Luke, although there are traces of it.

    The second vice I thought of was hatred. Using the same instance of Darth Vader force choking the man in A New Hope, that certainly seems like an instance of hatred. There are other hints, like the way in which Darth became the dark lord, or in the third movie, when the Emperor tells Luke to give into his anger.

    Over the course of the story, Luke must choose who he will follow; Vader, or Obi Wan? Pride or Humility? Hatred or Love?

    Plot Structure

    Like in the last post, this section describes the plot of The Empire Strikes Back according to the 3-Act Structure. You can look at the more in-depth plot of this movie here on K.M Weiland’s website.

    Characteristic Moment: Luke is scouting out terrain. Han and Leia are in the Rebel base.

    Inciting Event: Luke is attacked by a wild animal. Once he escapes, Obi Wan’s ghost tells Luke to train under a Jedi named Yoda.

    Push Point: The Empire attacks the rebel base, forcing them to flee. Luke goes to Yoda’s planet while Han and Leia fly off in the Falcon

    Pinch Point: Emperor Palpatine tells Darth Vader that Luke, son of Anakin, is the new enemy they must hunt down.

    Midpoint: When Luke sees the vision of Darth Vader but then he touches it and sees himself.

    Pinch Point: Luke sees Han and Leia being tortured in a vision and he goes to save them against his mentor’s warnings. Vader forces Lando to betray Han and Leia.

    Lowpoint: Han is frozen in carbonite. Luke finds out that his father, the man he looked up to and wanted to be like, is Darth Vader.

    Climax:  Luke chooses not to accept his father’s offer to join the Dark Side and ends up hanging at the bottom of a building.

    Resolution: Luke is rescued by Leia and they fly away to safety.

    Closing

    I hope this review/analyzation of The Empire Strikes Back has helped you see how plot, characters, and theme are tightly interwoven, and hopefully you can impliment some of these things in your own story. You can find the analyzations for movies 1 & 3 here and here.

    When you watched The Empire Strikes Back, what did you think of the plot twist? I’d love to hear about it. Share with me here!

  • Analyzing: A New Hope

    Analyzing: A New Hope

    A New Hope cover

    A New Hope: Star Wars OG #1

    Analyzer: Jubilee Anderson

    A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away….

    Luke has always wanted to do something more meaningful and adventurous than living his boring life in the desert planet of Tatooine. When Luke and his uncle bring home two droids, Luke tries to fix them up. But a secret message he discovers inside one droid will change the course of his future.

    A New Hope, Star Wars movie 4 (or #1 in the OG 3) has threads of good vs. evil, coming-of-age, and adventure.

    Why A Star Wars Series?

    I got my first taste of Star Wars at my cousin’s birthday party years ago. Since then, I’ve watched various movies in the series many times with my siblings.

    The last time we watched the Original 3 (OG 3), I decided to write a collection of movie reviews. But in addition, I also wanted to analyze the plot structure of the films so that writers who have watched them can understand the three-act structure and use it in their own novels. So buckle up, and let’s take a ride through outer space! BEWARE: SPOILERS AHEAD!

    My Thoughts

    I love it. It’s action packed with chase scenes, laser shooting, space ships, and cool interstellar planets. Everything you can expect from a thriller sci-fi movie.

    George Lucas is a master storyteller. Every time I watch this, I’m drawn in by the first movie. The second and third movies have awesome plot twists, but A New Hope really holds itself up. 

    My favorite scenes are the beginning scene when Luke finds the secret message, and the scene at the end when Luke and Han get their metals.

    Content Labels: Light romantic tension between characters, including flirting and a kiss on the cheek. 

    Takeaways: The ending of the movie left me smiling. As I said before, A New Hope could be a stand-alone. It holds itself up very well, and provides a good foundation for the next two movies and their awesome plot twists.

    For Ye Writers!

    Now let’s move on to the next section. This is the part for you writers out there. While I wrote all of this content on my own, I didn’t learn about story structure by myself! The links in the next section come from K.M. Weiland’s blog, Helping Writers Become Authors. She has an awesome platform, and I highly recommend checking it out!

    I’m just gonna warn you, this next part contains full spoilers of the entire movie. Trust me, this is not a movie series you want spoilers on!

    Character Arcs

    (This section describes how Luke changes internally throughout the movie)

    Luke has lived in his Normal World, Tatooine, his entire life. He’s tired of the normal and yearns for adventure.

    When Obi Wan tells Luke that his father, Anakin, was a Jedi, Luke says he wants to be a Jedi, too. But to be more specific, Luke didn’t just want to be a Jedi. He wanted to “be a Jedi like my father.” He wanted to be like his father. That hero, that honorable man.

    At the end of the story, Luke has achieved his goal. He’s not a Jedi yet, but he’s done something honorable. He’s saved his people from the Death Star. His Want is fulfilled.

    Luke has more of a flat arc in the first movie, in that he doesn’t learn anything specific. His Want wasn’t changed in any way, but he’s changed the world around him, and now he lives in the New World instead of the Old.

    Plot Structure

    This section describes the plot of A New Hope according to the 3-Act Structure. Again, while I discovered the plotpoints for this movie myself, I wasn’t the first person to do so, and I didn’t teach myself. K.M. Weiland has the entire plot of A New Hope laid out here if you’d like to study this more in depth.

    Characteristic Moment: Luke’s “normal world” is in Tatooine, living with his aunt and uncle. He wants to do something meaningful in life.

    Inciting Event: Luke finds Leia’s secret message in R2-D2 mentioning a man named “Obi Wan Kenobi.”

    Push Point: Luke’s aunt and uncle die, forcing him to go with Obi Wan.

    Pinch Point: The bad guys blow up Alderaan

    Midpoint: They’re sucked in by the Death Star’s gravitational pull. 

    Pinch Point: They end up in the trash compactor which the bad guys turn on

    Lowpoint: Darth Vader kills Obi Wan. Luke, Han, and Leia make it to the ship and fly away in grief.

    Climax: The Death Star is about to blow up the Rebel base. Luke flies a ship down the tunnel and shoots a laser beam into the mechanism that will destroy it. Death Star explodes.

    Resolution: Luke and Han get medals for their bravery. Luke has done what he always wanted to do: something meaningful. He’s a hero now.

    Closing

    I hope this review/analyzation of A New Hope has helped you see how plot, characters, and theme are tightly interwoven, and hopefully you can impliment some of these things in your own story. You can find the analyzations for movies 2 & 3 (or 5 & 6) here and here.

    Was this post helpful? What is one thing you’ve learned from a movie/book you’ve analyzed? I’d love to hear about it. Share with me here!

  • Ignite

    Ignite

    Ignite

    by Kara Swanson

    Ignite cover

    Book Review by Jubilee Anderson

    She’s a young phoenix living with her father and the other weary phoenixes. Mara. The one who will stay awake and keep watch against humans while the others hibernate. The humans of whom her father has always warned are bloodthirsty killers. But the humans find her anyway.

    This beautifully woven novel has themes of coming-of-age, hope, and finding one’s identity.

    I’d already read two of Kara’s books, Dust and Shadow, by the time my mom got me Ignite as a gift. I was thrilled. I had been on Kara’s street team for Ignite, and I could finally read it!

    It took me a minute to become fully invested in the plot, but after the ball got rolling, so to speak, it was good. I was kept in suspense, unsure of who was the good guy and who was the bad guy. I had no idea who to trust until the end. This is a well-written masterpiece!

    I felt like I didn’t connect with Mara as much as I would have liked, but I suspect that’s because the book wasn’t directed towards me. For that, I give it 4 stars. Otherwise, no complaints.

    CONTENT: Emotional & verbal abuse, violence

    TAKEAWAYS: I have never been in a situation like Mara’s, but even though I didn’t relate, I felt satisfied by the ending. While I look forward to the next book, I didn’t feel like I was left in complete suspense, thankfully! I’m so glad I was given the opportunity to be one of Kara’s Fiery Souls for Ignite. Can’t wait to see where this next book will take the story!

    Have you read Ignite, or any of Kara’s other books? What did you think? Tell me about it here!

  • Poetic Surrender

    Poetic Surrender

    Poetic Surrender

    by Molly McTernan

    Book Review by Jubilee Anderson

    Normally, I review fiction books, but I think this book is worth putting here.

    Poetic Surrender is a faith-based collection of poetry by Molly McTernan. It includes themes of faith (obviously), friendship, and everyday life.

    I was recommended this book for a long time. I kept hearing about it, seeing the cover, and reading Molly’s poetry on her website. Finally, I bought it. I read it at least twice on the first day.

    So many of the poems connected with me. I felt like Molly had experienced some of the same things as me — love of books and writing, loneliness, life with family and siblings. My favorite poems are “Who I Write For,” “I Want a Friend,” and “Bluebird.” She has room to grow as a poetry writer, but it’s the themes that really connect to me. God is using this book for good! It has fully earned 4.5 stars.

    Poetic Surrender was an encouragement in faith. A reminder. A reminder to love, to write for God, to be thankful, to see the small moments in life. Like the bluebird on my windowsill. Or the color red. Or the sound of the violin. I did not regret a penny of what I spent!

    Do you read poetry? What kind of poetry do you like? Respond to me here!

  • The Weeping Knight

    The Weeping Knight

    The Weeping Knight

    by Lauren Hildebrand

    The Weeping Knight cover

    Book Review by Jubilee Anderson

    No matter how hard he tries, Edric de Pleure can’t live up to God’s standards. Only Talisan, Edric’s squire, thinks he is perfect. When Talisan is captured by an evil knight, Edric must battle to get him back. Only a mystic sword, through the power of a certain One, can save him from this evil man.

    The Weeping Knight overflows with themes of justice, mercy, and living morally.

    I first found this book while asking around for more books to read in my genre. It was recommended to me by some writing friends of mine, so I bought it. This is now one of my favorite stand-alones. Lauren deals with heavy themes in a way that is gentle and respectful, but also brings hope. She weaves an incredible story that keeps you reading. I loved the poem at the end. It’s a poem every young man (and woman) should commit to memory these days! Lauren could grow in style and uniqueness, but otherwise I have no complaints. I rate thee five stars.

    CONTENT:

    Lauren deals with a lot of heavy themes from a Christian worldview and handles them very well. These include demonic powers and sexual abuse (not graphic, but mentioned throughout). The book overall is heavy, but the ending is worth it!

    TAKEAWAYS:

    I closed The Weeping Knight, happy to leave our Sir Edric to any journeys that should follow. He’s been through a lot, but he can finally rest, physically, emotionally, and spiritually.

    Do you like books that incorporate faith into the themes? Why or why not? Tell me about it here!

  • Honey Butter

    Honey Butter

    Honey Butter

    by Millie Florence

    Book Review by Jubilee Anderson

    Everlasting Blue, Slam Dunk Orange Dragon Fruit Pink…

    Seven-year-old Jamie Johnson is obsessed with collecting paint cards. In fact, it’s the only thing that can distract her from fighting with her older sister, during the long, boring summer. Until, that is, a mysterious girl moves in next door. Laren Lark is almost thirteen, a homeschooler, and a passionate poet.

    Despite their differences, the two girls quickly become friends and Jamie begins to think that the summer doesn’t have to be so boring. After all, Laren says that adventure can be found anywhere—it’s all about where you look.

    I first read this book as a PDF after signing up for Millie’s email list. I finished it the same morning, and was late for breakfast. Even though I read the PDF for free, (and you can, too!) I ended up buying two copies; one for my younger sister and one for my girl cousins.

    This is the best MG contemporary sister book I’ve ever read! Even though the main character is seven, I could still relate to her struggles. Even though I don’t have older siblings, I related to her annoyance with her older sister. I have a large family just like her. I related to her friendship with a unique girl who was way older than her.

    The parents didn’t simply preaching lessons to Jamie. They were loving, and especially the mom, was present. She was there. A friend, a mentor, Mommy to Jamie.

    I loved all the poems and poetic language. I loved the paint cards, the library, and the fun holidays on the calendar each day. This is a five-star read!

    The ending of Honey Butter is so beautiful. I came away encouraged to love my sister. Sometimes in the moment of an argument, it’s easy to see little sisters as annoying, but they’re not. They are blessings from the Lord — Every single sibling I have is a blessing.

    This is your next family read-aloud, or the present for your sister’s birthday! It’s short, but worth it!

    PUBLISHED: 2017

    PAPERBACK: $12

    Visit Millie’s website and get Honey Butter for free or read my book review on The Balter of Ashton Harper!

  • The Midnight Thorn, Part 3

    The Midnight Thorn, Part 3

    Recap:

    Evandar mounted the stairs. His hand smarted with each step. 

    Muriel shrank back. He glanced down at the powder in his hand and up at her once-beautiful face. I must do this. It’s my only choice. Now or never.

    The Midnight Thorn: A Short Story, Part 3

    by Jubilee Anderson

    He lunged and grabbed her arm. He flicked his hand. Powder fireworked above her head and fluttered down. It sprinkled her blonde hair. She screamed. 

    Evandar stepped back and poured the rest of the ash on his own head. Flakes spilled down his sweaty forehead and stuck there. Flakes coated his cheeks and ears. Flakes filled his eyes and nose. He coughed. His eyes burned. His throat burned. His hand burned. He stared at her. She stared back. Ash fluttered around them. 

    Suddenly the pain in his hand vanished. A torrent of emotions slammed him. Hatred. Black hatred. Each time he caught sight of her face a flame was kindled. Something gnawed inside him, desperate to fly into a rage. Temptation to give into his anger. Why did he hate her? He should love her. But he didn’t love her anymore. Or did he?

    Muriel’s vague outline bent over him. Her tears dripped onto his face, but he felt no remorse. Only hatred and pain. Pain. Like his bones were crumbling.

    He gripped her shoulders and jolted her. She struggled and squirmed from his grasp. She fled to a corner of the balcony. He clawed at his head, as if to rip out those voices that tempted him into further anger.

    “Father! Father!” He cried in a voice that was not his own.

    Silence pressed in. Muriel shook him. Hatred enveloped him. He desperately wanted to grab her and throw her against the wall. Wait. He was coming to. If he accepted things. Relaxed in hatred’s grip. He would be free. Free. His head throbbed. The voices whispered and his conscience argued.

    But no. How could he throw away the girl he had loved? How could he hate sweet Muriel?

    Did it matter? He no longer loved her. He hated her. 

    “Father!”

    A figure towered over him and cackled. “Your father cannot save you now, boy. There is no turning back. Your father doesn’t love you. Your father left you.” 

    Galdur. His dear friend. He relaxed and then ran the words through his head. Left me?

    “No! Father!”

    Your father hates you. The wizard’s voice penetrated his head. He has left.

    “No. He…loves…me! He’ll come back.”

    He betrayed you. Just like Muriel.

    Evandar flicked his eyes across the room wildly. Muriel huddled on the balcony, sobbing. Hatred rose in his throat.

    You are mine. I am your master now. I shall make you my slave and you shall love me more than you loved Amall.

    Evandar cursed and willed the voice to depart.

    You are no longer Evandar. Galdur’s voice rattled. You are Elatha. My dark prince.

    “No! Father, please.”

    Silence. No sound from heaven. No holy warmth filled him. Had his father forsaken him? Was Galdur right? Father had turned away. He had forgotten his son.

    “Father.” Evandar sobbed. Disorder and confusion crowded his brain. Father didn’t love him. Father had left. Galdur was more trustworthy than Amall. 

    Elatha rose to his feet, glaring down at Muriel. Her face filled with terror. She scrambled to  her feet and stumbled down the steps. Elatha raised his fist. He tore past Galdur and after her.

    Galdur chuckled. He swept down the steps on the other side of the balcony.

    Elatha didn’t care. He had to get her. She had betrayed him. He closed in on her. Her hair billowed out behind her. 

    Suddenly she whirled around. He skidded. Her face was pale, but her eyes were fierce. Something had changed. Her eyes were no longer blue. They were piercing black. Like the eyes of Amall.

    “Evandar. Stop!” She raised her hands.

    Evandar. The word pierced his soul. He suddenly remembered. It filled him with a strange peace. “Muriel.” He lowered his fist. “I’m sorry.”

    “He’s evil!” Muriel jabbed a finger at Galdur. Evandar stared at her blankly.

    “Shut up, little girl.” Galdur snapped. “Your friend is going to die. You might as well give him up.”

    “You knew this would happen!” she screamed. Her black eyes flamed. “You knew he would help me!”

    Father’s words echoed through Evandar’s head. “You are stronger than the curse. You are stronger than the curse.” He was stronger than…. He needed to kill Galdur. Before it was too late. Before he was subdued.

    Muriel stood before him, her hands on his shoulders. “Evandar. Evandar!”

    Evandar forced himself to kneel beside her. He struggled to speak without flying into a rage. “Muriel. We…must…kill him.”

    Lead weighted his feet with each step. Sweat ran down his forehead as he labored towards his dear frie– towards Galdur. 

    Galdur bent over the stone basin, a wicked curl to his lips. He closed his eyes and uttered a spell. 

    Not magic. Evander flew towards him.

    The wizard’s eyes bolted open. He flung aside his robe revealing a long staff. Ragged hair flowed down, his terrible eyes flashing. He hoisted his weapon above his head and swung. Evandar ducked beneath the flying wood. He dove at Galdur’s neck. He drew his knife. Gripping Galdur in a choke-hold, he raised the blade. The wizard grappled at his throat, trying to wheeze out an incantation. Evandar clenched the hilt. 

    But his hand was frozen. 

    How could he kill someone he loved so much? Galdur had made him a prince. He had provided him with a home. He had offered to feed him. To shelter him from Amall who had abandoned him. All he had required was for Evandar to become his servant. Galdur was his dear friend. 

    Or was he? No. Galdur had tricked them. Lured Muriel into a trap. Turned her into a traitor. 

    But Evandar didn’t care about Muriel. 

    Or did he? Once he had loved her. Once he had been willing to sacrifice his life for her.

    Gong! A bell tolled from above, shaking the castle. 

    Gong! Evandar choked on his breath. What time was it? Not midnight. How had time passed so quickly?

    Gong! 

    Death. He was going to die.

    Gong!

    No! He was too young for this.

    Gong!

    “My son. Kill him. Kill the curse.”

    Gong!

    He saw the vague shadow of Muriel gripping his hand, forcing it down. 

    Gong! 

    He fought her grip. Galdur was his dear friend. He could not kill him. He could not.

    Gong!

    He jerked his knife away. It slipped through Muriel’s grasp, slicing her palm. She cried out, clutching her bleeding hand.

    Gong!

    She grabbed for the knife, blood trickling down her arm. Galdur clawed at his throat. He ripped away.

    Gong!

    Muriel leapt for Evandar’s arm. She dragged it back. “Hate the evil, Evandar.” Galdur elbowed her in the side but she held on. He lunged for his staff.

    Gong!

    Evandar thrust his hand down. The blade plunged into Galdur’s chest. Evandar screamed. What had he done? He wrenched the knife out. He bent over Galdur, cradling his face.

    “Galdur! Wake up!” 

    Gong! The midnight bell tolled. The peal wound up the spires of the wizard’s castle and quaked the floor beneath their feet.

    Galdur shuddered. His face washed grey. His eyes filmed over, and he fell still. 

    The ground beneath Evandar’s feet vanished. He plummeted for an instant. Then his head cracked on the ground.

    -ˋˏ ༻❁༺ ˎˊ-

    The fog had cleared.

    Evandar lifted his head. He felt strangely exhausted. Like he might collapse, or black out. He slumped on the floor. He knew he ought to be thinking about something in particular, but he couldn’t place it.

    Until he felt her hand. The familiar rose scent. Muriel bent over him. Her quiet sobs filled his ears. He opened his heavy eyelids. She was smiling. She brushed her tears with her white hand. Her golden hair splashed over her shoulders. Her ocean eyes sparkled.

    “Evandar. The curse is dead.” 

    He stared into her shining face. Suddenly he remembered, like when one wakes up in the morning and recalls a horrid nightmare.

    Galdur lay pale a few feet away. Blood leaked from a deep wound in his heart. His hideous eyes were ashen.

    Evandar glanced at Muriel. Dead. The curse is dead. 

    He leapt to his feet and let out a whoop. Joy and strength rushed upon him. He swept Muriel into his arms. He spun in the center of the room, gazing at the castle spires that towered above him. Light shafted from a high window. 

    He whisked her out the double doors. Mother Earth’s sun rays poured from above. Greenery carpeted the courtyard. Robins and bluebirds flitted from tree to tree. 

    Evandar laughed.

    A single rosebush grew in the center of the courtyard. Dozens of the reddest, most delicate roses bloomed upon it. Beside the rose bush stood a stone bench.

    There he set Muriel down, and plunked onto the bench beside her.

    “You did it!” Muriel laughed. “You were stronger than the curse.”

    Evandar pondered her words. The scene replayed in his head. Muriel had thrown herself in front of him. Her eyes had changed to black. Like the piercing black of the gods. How had that happened? She hadn’t done it to herself.

    Evandar looked up and searched the clouds. There on the topmost flurry sat a figure in the likeness of a king. Radiance shone from him.

    “Father,” he said aloud.

    “Why did you doubt me, my son?”

    Amall’s presence glowed around them. Evandar leaned into it. “Thank you.”

    “I am always with you.”

    “Don’t you see him, Riel? Father’s up in that cloud.” Evandar placed an arm around her shoulder and pointed upward.

    “No. I don’t. Where?” Muriel shaded her eyes from the morning sun and peered up. Suddenly, she let out a low gasp. Her cheeks glowed.

    “I see!”

    She stood in the warmth for a minute, her eyes sparkling in awe like when Evandar had first tucked a rose in her hair. 

    “I love you, my children.” And Evandar knew Muriel could hear Amall’s voice, too. 

    His heart felt a tug. A longing to drift upwards to where his father stood. But Amall was fading. Drifting away. Another gust of wind and his figure vanished. Evandar knew Father was still watching, he just couldn’t see.

    He found himself staring at Muriel. He stood up, as if with a sudden thought.

    “Close your eyes.”

    She did so, and smiled. Evandar crept across the garden. He cut the reddest, most delicate rose, and tucked it in her long blonde tresses. Muriel’s cheeks dimpled. A heavenly fragrance hung in the air. He eased onto the stone bench.

    “You can open them.”

    Her ocean eyes fluttered open. She stroked the rose with her finger. A beam spread across her face. “Your father really takes care of you, doesn’t he?”

    Evandar’s heart thumped as she met his gaze.

    “Yes. He’ll take care of you, too.” Evandar paused. He slipped his hand into his pocket and pulled out a little box. “And I’ll take care of you, if you’ll have me.” 

    Evandar slid off the bench and onto one knee, extending the opened box in his hands. Muriel’s fingers flew to her mouth. Her blue eyes widened. The silver ring glittered. The red gem set in the collet formed the pattern of a rose.

    “Yes,” she whispered.