Author: Jubilee Anderson

  • The Midnight Thorn, Part 2

    The Midnight Thorn, Part 2

    The Midnight Thorn: A Short Story, Part 2

    by Jubilee Anderson

    Evandar pounded across the rickety drawbridge. He glanced down. Billows of moat water rose as if by magic and crashed onto the bridge. Evandar slipped, but leapt up. Waves smashed into him. He gripped the flimsy wood as water poured over his head. He slumped on hands and knees, coughing up the bitter liquid. Then he got up and ran, his cloak drenched. Wind chilled his tunic and skin. 

    Spires towered into the black sky above him. Black birds circled the turrets. Before him, a huge stone gate stood open. Dripping, he stepped off the drawbridge and dragged himself up the rocky path. He halted under the jagged teeth of the portcullis. 

    Evandar peered in. The courtyard was black and empty. In the center, a single shrub grew with a single red rose. The rest of the roses were white as though life had been sucked from them.

    Evandar’s heart thumped as he padded through the gates. The castle’s double doors were cracked open. The inside was black. 

    “Caw!”

    Evandar started. A black crow, chest puffed out, perched on the branch of a skeleton tree. His crows sing by his command. Evandar shuddered. 

    He crept across the courtyard, past the single red rose, to the double doors. It was like Galdur was expecting him. He gripped the door handle and eased the door open. It creaked. He froze. He slipped inside.

    At first he couldn’t make out anything. The blackness strangled him. He strained his eyes. Then he made out a dim glow. A candle. Evandar sensed from the change in the sound of his breathing that he had entered a huge room. A strong, sweet smell suffocated him. His stomach churned. I need fresh air.

    An empty throne hunkered at the far end of the room on a dais, and above it was a balcony with a flight of steps on either side. Otherwise, the room was empty. His breath echoed. Was he alone?

    Wait. Something stirred in the corner. His heart raced. An evil laugh pealed from one corner of the room.

    Evandar started. 

    A figure stepped towards him from the shadows. 

    Evandar shrank back. 

    Galdur bored holes into him with a wicked smile. His ragged hair dangled from his head. A black robe had been thrown over his shoulders. His pale blue eyes gleamed.

    “Come in. Come in,” he purred.

    Evandar fingered his pocket knife and eyed the sunken face. “Where is Muriel?” 

    The wizard chuckled until his ragged blonde hair fell in front of his eyes. “Little do you know,” he muttered, then louder, “You do not want to rescue her, boy. It requires a great price.”

    “I am willing to pay it.” Evandar squared his shoulders.

    The wizard sneered and trod towards Evandar. “Yes, you’re willing to pay a lot, but are you willing to pay your life tonight when the bell tolls? Are you willing to hate her as much as you loved her from the instant you take it on? Nay. She will be mine forever. And if you choose, there is no turning back. Not even Amall can save you from me.”

    Evandar squeezed the hilt of his knife. “My father can save me.”

    “Your father doesn’t love you. It’s all a lie.”

    “Yes, he does.”

    “Wait until you are tormented. Then you will know that your father has left.” He whispered the last word so that it hissed up the castle spires.

    “I don’t believe you.” He wouldn’t give in. He had to do it. He only had to find out how.

    “Come, look into this pool.”

    Evandar eyed the wizard’s pale eyes. Galdur’s smirk chilled his skin. Evandar hesitated, and forced a few steps towards a table at the side of the room. He peered over the rim of the basin. Cold stone plastered the bottom. It was empty.

    “Did you know this palace used to be as beautiful as yours?”

    Evandar glanced up at the desolate spires that mounted dozens of feet above. He stared at Galdur and shook his head. 

    “Did you know, I once knew a certain girl? She loved me and promised me her hand. But then one day, before we were to marry, she betrayed me.” Galdur closed his eyes and breathed a few silent words. He bent over the basin, moving his hands in a circle. 

    Evandar let out a low gasp.  At first it was a thin swirl. The swirl grew thicker until mist poured from the pit of the basin. It pinwheeled until it rippled like water in a pool, but instead of his own reflection, he saw the reflection of someone else. A golden-haired figure with the black eyes of a goddess. Tall. Slender. Holy.

    “Mother Earth.” He stared into his mother’s kind eyes.

    “Aye. Your father stole her. When Earth left, she took the beauty from my castle with her new powers.” Galdur bolted upright and threw his fist in the air. 

    Evandar flinched. His father’s words echoed through his head. “He is a deceiver and a sorcerer. He almost hurt your mother. Flee from him.”

    “She should never have promised you anything,” Evandar said. “Father was protecting her.”

    Galdur sneered. “You don’t know much about love, do you?”

    Evandar gripped his knife again and edged forward. “Tell me, Galdur. Tell me how to break the curse.”

    “You don’t want to know.”

    “I do.”

    “You’re too weak.” Galdur played with the fur border on his robe.

    “I can handle it.”

    He dropped the robe. “Very well.” he sneered. “Go out to the center of the courtyard, and there you will find a rosebush. Pluck one of the roses and burn it in your hand. You must burn it until it is ashes, and you must not put out the fire until then. Sprinkle some of the dust on her head and the rest of the dust on yours. Then the curse shall be removed from her and transferred to you.”

    Evandar glanced through the doors into the courtyard. The little red rose poked up amidst the grey. For some reason he had expected this to be harder. “Why are you telling me this?”

    “Your love for her is too strong, boy. You are too foolish to listen to my words.”

    Evandar eyed him. 

    Galdur’s pale eyes flicked across him from time to time. His ragged hair jiggled with each wag of his head. Galdur fingered his black robe. 

    Evandar had to do it. He couldn’t let Muriel die with hatred in her once-sweet heart.

    With one last glance at the wizard, Evandar stepped away from the basin.  I must do this for Muriel. His legs carried him out the double doors and across the courtyard. He spotted the bush and strode to it. 

    He drew his knife. He cut the rose. The reddest, most delicate rose. For Muriel. Heavenly fragrance. Velvety petals. Blushing heart. A piece of Muriel herself. 

    He knelt, uncurling his fingers. He opened his tinder box and struck the match. Muriel. Remember me when I am gone. The match flared. He prodded the petals with the end of the stick. 

    Flames licked across the rose petals. He blocked the wind with his other hand, tensing to feel the sting. They licked to the rose’s heart. He blew on it slightly. It burst into flame. At first he felt nothing, but then he felt a sting. The heat burned his hand. He clenched his teeth, holding still. This is for you. I will live through it for you.

    The flames scorched. They swallowed the rose. A sickening sweet smell rose up in a trail of smoke. The fire unfurled its red and yellow banners. Blisters broke out on his palm. Evandar gasped in pain.

    “You won’t…die tonight, Muriel. You…won’t.” He squeezed tears from his eyes. He wouldn’t blow it out.

    The fire burned bright for a few more seconds. Evandar could barely look at the flames in his palm. Then with a poof, it extinguished. 

    Evandar gritted his teeth. Each fleck of dust pricked his skin. He rose with a thin coat of ashes in his raw, burnt palm. Though the fire was gone, he felt no different. It stung. It scorched. It charred. 

    He covered his hand so the dust wouldn’t swirl and shuffled across the courtyard. His mind was frozen. He stepped through the double doors into the black room and waited for his eyes to adjust. 

    Galdur snickered when he came in. “So you did it. Your poor mother is weeping from heaven. Hear her cries for you.” 

    “Where is Muriel?” Evandar’s voice trembled. 

    “Up there.”

    Evandar raised his eyes. Muriel gripped the rails, glaring down at him from the balcony above the throne. “What do you want with me, Prince?”

    Evandar mounted the stairs. His hand smarted with each step. 

    Muriel shrank back. He glanced down at the powder in his hand and up at her once-beautiful face. I must do this. It’s my only choice. Now or never.

  • The Midnight Thorn, Part 1

    The Midnight Thorn, Part 1

    The Midnight Thorn: A Short Story, Part 1

    by Jubilee Anderson

    “I have a present for you.” Evandar twirled the grass stem between his fingers and gazed into Muriel’s face.

    Muriel leaned forward. “What is it?” 

    “Close your eyes.” 

    She did so, smiling. Evandar discarded the grass stem and crept across the garden. He cut the reddest, most delicate rose, and nestled it in her long blonde tresses. Like the shining sea. Muriel’s cheeks dimpled. A heavenly fragrance hung in the air. He eased onto the stone bench. She looks like a rose herself.

    “It’s ready.”

    She opened her sparkling eyes. Wonder unfurled across her face. Her white fingers stroked the rose. “It’s…like velvet. I’d leave it here forever if it lasted that long.”

    Evandar’s eyes twinkled. “Why do you think I planted this garden?”

    Muriel beamed and clasped her hands in her gown. She fixed her ocean eyes on the sky. Evandar gazed up, too. High up, a flurry of puffs dappled the deep blue. Lower down, cottony clouds ferried to and fro. 

    “Does your father really live up there?” Muriel asked.

    Evandar nodded and scanned the heavens. On a low cloud towered a king-like figure. His hair was dark and his eyes piercing black. Radiance dazzled him, lighting up the cloud like lightning.

    “Father,” Evandar said aloud.

    “Hello, son.” The god’s voice echoed in his mind.

    “Don’t you see him, Riel? Up in that cloud.” He wrapped one arm around her and pointed.

    “No. Where?”

    Evandar sighed. Muriel would never see his father. Only he could, because he was half god himself.

    Muriel scrunched her thin eyebrows. “Where?”

    “Above your head.”

    Muriel shaded her eyes from the morning sun and peered up. 

    Amall smiled from the cloud, and Mother Earth—Evandar’s mother, whom Amall had loved from among the humans—rose up beside him. She waved down, and Evandar waved back. 

    After a minute, Muriel shook her head. “You’re playing with me.”

    “I’m not. He’s really there.”

    Evandar propped his elbow on the stone arm of the bench and rested his chin on his knuckles. Would she ever believe him?

    “Do not give up hope, my son. One day she shall see me.” Amall’s voice rumbled.

    Evandar glanced up, and his heart felt a tug. A longing to drift upwards where his parents stood. But they were fading. Drifting away. Another gust of wind and they vanished. He knew they were still watching him, he just couldn’t see. 

    He turned his attention to Muriel, and his heart skipped a beat. She gazed back at him. Was now the right time? 

    “I was going to ask you something.” He paused. He desperately wanted to blurt the words out, but his jaw froze in place. Will you marry me? 

    But the words didn’t come. “I was going to tell you…” 

    She stared at him, a crease forming on her gossamer brow.

    “I wanted to tell you that you look pretty with that rose.”

    She blushed.

    How silly. Wasting precious minutes with words she’d heard a hundred times. 

    At that moment, the castle bells tolled. Supper time. Muriel rose from the bench. 

    “Come on, Vander!”

    Evandar’s heart sank. He had lost his chance. When would he get this over with?

    -ˋˏ ༻❁༺ ˎˊ- 

    He’d been biting his nails over this for months. It was time. Evandar hiked the path to the garden, forcing a few whistled notes from his lips. His stomach clenched as he made out Muriel’s figure at the top of the hill.

    Why was he so afraid? He already knew what her answer would be.

    He stuffed his hands in his pockets, fingering the little box. He shook it gently. The ring clicked against the box’s wooden sides. 

    Muriel danced amidst the roses, her bare feet pressing perfect footprints in the loam. Sunlight danced in her golden hair. Her blue eyes were cast towards a tall, broad-shouldered man. His cloak was stretched over a bush beside him and he stood before her in his tunic, conversing with her. Dirty blonde hair dangled from his head. Evandar stilled. 

    The stranger stroked Muriel’s hair. When he removed his hand, Evandar noticed a rose nestled in her golden tresses. A rose the man had given her. Who was he? Why was he touching his maiden? And why was she letting him?

    At once, the two figures glanced in his direction. Evandar recognized him.

    Galdur. Fear and jealousy edged his heart as Amall’s words rang through his mind. “He’s a deceiver and a sorcerer. He almost hurt your mother. Flee from him.”

    Galdur shrunk back and dipped curtly to Muriel. He turned on his heel and strutted out the opposite exit, leaving his cloak sprawled across the bush. 

    Evandar strode through the gate, his heart thumping. The sky darkened, as though Father himself felt each beat. The strong smell of roses stunned his senses as he stepped into the ring of bushes. 

    Muriel sat alone on the stone bench, her shoulders slumped. Blonde curls fell over her darkened eyes. A frown slid across her rosy face as he entered.

    Evandar edged onto the bench. “Who was that man?”

    “Oh. He’s-he’s my friend.”

    “Galdur?”

    She scuffed her foot in the dirt. “I only see him sometimes.”

    Oh.

    “I love him.”

    Evandar froze. He stared at her eyes which were tainted gray. A dark shadow fell over her beautiful face. The sweet, lovely, faithful Muriel he had known was gone.

    His gaze shifted to the black cloak Galdur had discarded. It suffocated the roses beneath it. Thorns pricked through the fabric in places. If only the thorns would tear the cloak to shreds. 

    How could she?

    “But, Muriel, isn’t he a sorcerer?” 

    Muriel grimaced. “It’s not sorcery. It’s magic. He can make roses bloom more lovely than Mother Earth herself. His crows sing by his command. His castle is spacious. All I had to do was pass his test, and he let me in.”

    “Muriel, what if it’s a lie? What if he’s tricking you?”

    “He was my family’s friend. I trust him.”

    “But your family betrayed you.”

    “I want to marry him.” 

    What?

    Suddenly the bench felt hard and cold. The roses’ scent suffocated him. The flowers on the bushes paled. White as Muriel’s cheeks. Her stone face. Her harsh eyes. Her shadowed hair.

    How long had this gone on without his knowledge? Her faithfulness was gone. Her beauty had disappeared. She was gone. Gone.

    “Muriel, what’s going on?”

    “Do not call me Muriel. Call me Mallory.”

    Mallory? Cursed. A chill ran down his bones. She was really gone.

    Something choked him. He fought it. “But you have a home with me.”

    “Be quiet!” she screamed and bounded to her feet. Evandar flinched and gripped the stone bench. She stuck her arms behind her, panting in rage. Her ragged blonde hair hung down her cheeks. She clenched her fists. “I don’t want you! I’ve already given my hand to Galdur.”

    Evandar released his clench on the stone and placed his trembling hands in his lap. “I thought you loved me, Riel.”

    “No. I hate you.” She whirled around and fled. Her bare feet beat the ground through the spiral of rose bushes. 

    Evandar sprang to his feet. “Muriel!”

    But she kept sprinting. Fleeing the garden. Fleeing the palace. Fleeing him. Her blonde hair fluttered behind her. 

    Evandar stared after her in horror. What had Galdur done to her? What had she become?

    She darted through the gates and down the winding path. Her figure grew smaller and smaller until it vanished around a bend. She never glanced back. Could he have said anything different? Why did she leave?

    “Father. Father! Where are you?”

    It began as a faint warmth in his battered heart. The warmth swelled until he was sure he could breathe it. Amall did not make himself visible as he usually did, but Evandar knew he stood beside him. My son.

    He wanted his father to stroke his hair, to breathe on him, to squeeze him tight. “Father, what has happened to her?”

    The air beside him stirred. “Galdur has cursed her. Her life is in danger. When the bells ring tonight at midnight, she will surely die. You alone, my son, can save her.”

    “How?”

    “Go to Galdur’s fortress. Galdur will tell you. Beware of his trickery. He is trying to lure you in, but you must do as he wants if you love her.”

    “Then I will die.”

    “You are stronger than the curse. Trust me, Evandar.”

    Evandar searched the empty space beside him. The warmth in his heart was fading. The air around him returned to its normal state. “Wait!”

    But the warmth vanished. He could not command the gods to go where he wanted. Least of all his own father. Evandar slumped on the bench. He shoved his hand in his pocket and tore out the little box. The ring rattled inside. He clenched it in his fist for a second. Then he hurled it into a bush. 

    His throat tightened. His dream was dead. Or was it?

    Go to Galdur’s fortress. Evandar stared at the little box perched on the thorny branches that sprawled across the garden.

    Anger tore his insides. He forced himself to his feet.  

    A lovely golden face filled his mind. Sparkling ocean eyes. Lips like the reddest rose. Muriel. He couldn’t let her die. He had to save her before it was too late. Evandar picked the little box from the bush and slipped it in his pocket. He fixed his eyes on the gate where the girl who had called herself Mallory fled.

    For Muriel. 

    He sucked in a breath and began to sprint.

  • The Dragon’s Tooth

    The Dragon’s Tooth

    The Dragon’s Tooth

    N.D. Wilson

    Book Review by Jubilee Anderson

    Two years ago, Cyrus Smith’s father died and his mother fell into a coma. Ever since then, he’s lived in Room 111 in a rickety motel that he runs with his older sister, Antigone, and brother, Daniel. Until one day, when a strange man makes a strange phone call, demanding for Cyrus’s room – Room 111. 

    The Dragon’s Tooth explores themes of family relationships and finding one’s identity.

    My favorite part about N. D. Wilson’s writing is the realism in his descriptions. (You would have to read the book to understand me) This is definitely a boy book, and the descriptions seem like the kind that make girls cringe and boys relate. I mean, do we really need to describe the snot covering the main character’s face when he falls in the bucket?? But then again, being the oldest of 6, I know it makes Cyrus so much more real, and it adds to N.D. Wilson’s unique style.

    While I loved the story, I didn’t feel like I could connect to Cyrus as much as I wanted to. But my oppinion hardly counts, since I’m hardly the target audience. Another thing I disliked was the swear words. If not for that, I would say this is a great read-aloud!

    CONTENT:

    There is some swearing and a bit of violence. Google said the age range for The Dragon’s Tooth is 8-12, but I think it’s more like 10+. I’m going to give this 3 1/2 stars.

    TAKEAWAYS:

    When I closed the last page, I was satisfied. I loved the sibling relationships. (Antigone is literally the best sister!) I loved the action. I loved that I didn’t feel like I had to read the next book, even though I wanted to, and I eventually did. That’s the kind of book I like.

    What kind of books do you like? Have you read The Dragon’s Tooth, or any of N.D. Wilson’s other books? What did you think? Tell me about it HERE!

  • Cloak of the Light

    Cloak of the Light

    Cloak of the Light

    Chuck Black

    Cloak of the Light

    Book Review by Jubilee Anderson

    Drew Carter’s life is full of heartbreak and tragedy. With the loss of his dad and the death of his friend, it seems like there’s no purpose in life. Going to college might be the best way for a new start. 

    But while experimenting in the college lab, a piece of equipment explodes, leaving Drew blind. Months later, when Drew regains his sight, he realizes his senses are heightened and he can see into another realm—a realm of strange warriors who fight to influence the human world for good or for evil.

    Cloak of the Light weaves in themes of good vs evil, spiritual warfare, and finding one’s purpose.

    I’ve heard a lot about Chuck Black over the past few years, so when I finally saw his book at the library a few months ago, I instantly picked it up. While I was hooked pretty quickly, I kept waiting for something to happen to get the action going, which took a little bit. Finally, I got to the part where Drew’s friend messed up on the experiment, and after that there was no way I was putting the book down. 

    The plot was so unique and so suspenseful! It was like a mystery to find out who the strange warriors were. I also loved the realism of the beginning. I felt like, while I haven’t gone through what Drew did, he lived a normal life in a normal world. He could have been one of my friends.

    My only suggestion is, get the second and third books before you finish the first one—you’ll need them!

    I’m going to give this one 4 stars.

    CONTENT:

    There’s spiritual warfare and some violence, but Chuck Black is a Christian author, and he does an amazing job of writing wholesome stories!

    TAKEAWAYS:

    Cloak of the Light brings to light that spiritual warfare is real. This series is a great book for boys. I highly recommend these books! Chuck Black is awesome!

    Have you read Cloak of the Light? What are your thoughts on this book? Let me know HERE!

  • The False Prince

    The False Prince

    The False Prince

    Jennifer Nielsen

    The False Prince cover

    Book Review by Jubilee Anderson

    War brews in Carthya. Connor, a Carthyan noble, must install a puppet ruler for the people before battle breaks out. He chooses four boys to compete for the role, including the cunning orphan, Sage.

    Sage has two weeks to prove Connor that he’s worthy to be the false prince. He is wary of Connor’s suspicious plans, but his life hangs in a balance. Not following along may mean the end of him.

    A friend recommended me this book. I read the first book, and it blew my mind. Nielsen is the master of plot twists. Sage is such a unique character. As I worked my way through the series, it amazed me how many times Sage shocked me by his abilities. At the same time I wondered why I was still surprised. After all, that’s who Sage is!

    As a Christian, I believe that lying is wrong. While Sage is still an amazing character, deception seems to be upheld in his personality. Sage never feels guilty for lying, and while the villain gets recompensed for his deceit, Sage often gets away with it.

    Despite this, The False Prince is still a 4 star on my list, and it’s is a middle grade thriller that you’ll find hard to put down!

    Content

    Violence // Murder // Very mild romance (later books have more)

    Takeaways

    Watching Sage navigate his relationships with the other boys, with Connor, and with his love interest connected with me as I navigate my own friendships.

    In the end, the bad guy lost, the good guy won. We are smiling because we’ve gone on a journey. We’ve stood at the point of the sword and not fallen off. It’s a beautifully woven tale, and highly recommended.

    Have you read The False Prince? What did you think? What is your favorite book? Tell me about it HERE!

  • On the Edge of the Dark Sea of Darkness

    On the Edge of the Dark Sea of Darkness

    On the Edge of the Dark Sea of Darkness

    Andrew Peterson

    On the Edge of the Dark Sea of Darkness cover

    Book Review by Jubilee Anderson

    Janner Igiby and his siblings have lived in Glipwood as long as he can remember. They’ve lived basically normal lives, except for the lizard-like fangs that patrol their city, or the looming threat of imprisonment. Or worse, the threat of being taken by the Black Carriage. So yes, pretty normal. But when the fangs single out the Igiby family amidst all the other families in Glipwood, Janner suspects there’s something his mother and grandfather are hiding about the past, his dead father, and their own lives.

    On the Edge of the Dark Sea of Darkness, the first book of four in the Wingfeather Saga, weaves themes of courage, responsibility and siblinghood in a battle of good vs. evil.

    I first began this book a few years ago, and I couldn’t put it down until I’d read the entire series. As the oldest of a sister and several brothers, I really connected with Janner Igiby. Andrew Peterson does a great job of hooking the reader with his characters and humor. I love his style so much! My family is currently reading the last book in the series, and I would definitely recommend this as a family read-aloud.

    CONTENT:

    Mild Violence // Slightly scary for young children

    TAKEAWAYS:

    As I mentioned before, I really connected to Janner’s weight of responsibility for his siblings as he learns to care for them and ultimately love them. I came away from this book satisfied, and although I didn’t feel like I had to read the other books, a while later, I did. And boy, I sure am glad I did, too! The fourth book is the best, and the Wingfeather Saga became one of my favorite series.

    I hope you enjoyed this book review. Have you read On the Edge of the Dark Sea of Darkness? What do you think? What’s your favorite book? Tell me HERE!

  • Knightfall Chapter 1

    Knightfall Chapter 1

    Text copyright © 2025 Jubilee Anderson

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    Knightfall map

    Chapter 1

    Chink. Chink. Chink. Markus struck the oak doors with his gauntleted fist. A whiff of dampness wafted from the wood. Markus examined the pitted grains in the door. Like someone had taken a hammer and smashed it. 

    Augustus, his steed, snorted from outside the rubble gate surrounding the manor. Justice and Glory pawed at the ground with their hooves, and the knights who had accompanied Markus straightened in their saddles. 

    His gaze fell on the garden and he shuddered. Ivy spiraled up the rose bushes, trapping their suffocated flowers. Weeds choked the short grass that used to carpet the garden floor.

    A twisted net of ivy stems crawled up the grey ashlar blocks that stacked the manor. The shutters were shut fast like the bars of a prison. Dark gray slate tiles overlapped the pointed roofs of the mansion. 

    A black cloud billowed over the afternoon sun and a lone wind whistled through the pine leaves. 

    Welcome home.

    He lifted his hand rapped a second time. Where was the paper-crinkled beam of Hadel the butler who should have opened the door by now? Had no one heard him knock? 

    Markus turned his head and glanced through the broken gate. The two riders stared back. They were supposed to accompany him on the first part of the assignment, but Markus wished he had gone alone. This tarry at his family’s house would be anything but short.

    A heavy scrape rolled behind the door. Markus studied the dents in the wood, his heart thumping. Was it Hadel? Or what if a stranger had banished his family from the house and was inhabiting it? The door clicked.

    Creaaakkk! A figure moved in the dim light of the open hallway. A curly head poked out. 

    Markus drew back. “Nathaniel?”

    Nathaniel gasped and flung the double doors open. He barreled into Markus before he could open his arms. “Markus!”

    Markus pried his arms out of his brother’s bear hug and wrapped them around him.  He breathed in the crisp scent of old books that settled in Nathaniel’s hair when he feasted on his library too much.

    Markus pulled away and studied his brother.

    The makings of a beard stuck out from Nathaniel’s chin. The Trojan horse dangled by a chain around his neck. It had been a year since he’d seen his brother. Things hadn’t gone well at their parting months before, but maybe Nathaniel had forgotten.

    Markus smiled. “You haven’t changed a bit!” Unlike Markus. Markus had left for a summer of fun and returned with a load of responsibility. 

    “Will you be staying for once?” Nathaniel asked. Markus knew his brother had meant to tease him, but the words stung.

    Why did every conversation turn out the same way? “I guess not,” he replied.

    Nathaniel only shrugged and stared at Augustus’s empty saddle and at the two men who had ridden with Markus from Canater. “You were escorted?”

    Markus dipped his head. One of the riders pulled his steed’s left rein in a sharp turn to ride through the gate. “Sire. Shall we come in?” 

    Markus nodded again. “Take my horse to the stable.” The two riders guided the horses past Markus and around the side of the manor.

    Nathaniel took a step back. “Sire? Who are you? Look. You may have secrets but you’re still in our family, Markus.”

    Not this again. The last words of Nathaniel from a year ago rang in Markus’s ears. All you care about is yourself! Would this conversation end like the last one? Markus braced himself.

    Nathaniel swallowed and his gaze wandered across the hills beyond the manor. “I have something to show you before we get any further with this.” 

    “Let me go in first and say hello to Mother and–”

    “Markus, please.” Nathaniel took a deep breath. “Come.” He brushed past Markus and whipped across the path that led around the manor. 

    Markus watched his brother’s retreating figure for an instant before hastening after him. Nathaniel kept his brisk pace and stepped onto the grass. 

    Markus followed him up a steep hill, his heart faltering. Why was Nathaniel acting so strange? Weeds slapped his legs, begging him to turn around. Where were the servants who cut the grass regularly? What was going on?

    He glanced at his brother’s downturned face and started in surprise. It was as gray as the manor blocks. Nathaniel’s fingers played with the Trojan horse fastened around his neck. A tear escaped his eyelid and trickled down his cheek. He brushed it away.

    “What’s…wrong?” Markus waited for Nathaniel to tell him it was all a joke, to take him back to the house. They would both laugh and the world would go back to normal.

    Nathaniel didn’t answer. 

    They came to a halt at the top of the hill, wind tousling their identical dark hair. Suddenly Markus realized where they were. He could see the slab of stone that had been laid above his father’s grave over the jagged grass. His heart clenched. Emotions slammed into him. He fought to control his breath. Why had Nathaniel brought him here?

    Markus followed Nathaniel’s gaze and fixed his eyes on the tall weeds a few feet ahead. He forced himself to take a step. Nathaniel stood, a white statue. Markus searched the grass. 

    And then he stopped. His heart caught in his throat. Something gray poked above the yellow stems. Something stone. A crooked crack sliced it in two. Another headstone. He took a step. He heard Nathaniel’s quiet sobs behind him. 

    Markus bent over the stone. A single slab rested on the sunken mound. In the middle, three crude words were etched.

    Celestia de Castor

    He knelt and reached out a trembling hand, tracing the cold letters with his finger. The wind whispered her name and then shrieked it. Estia. Estia! Markus’s chest tightened. He tried to suck in air. He gripped the stone with both hands as if to pull it from the ground and bent his head over it.

    No. Not my little sister.

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    Markus crushed a clump of dirt and looked back to see it crumbled in a boot print of flattened grass like his life a few minutes ago. Another tear streaked his face. He wiped it away. The wind stung his wet cheeks. 

    “How?” he whispered.

    Nathaniel’s voice cut through the quiet. “They came… they wanted to take her to be a maid in Lord Kend’s palace.”

    Just like Charlotte. Markus’s heart throbbed remembering his betrothed. The lovely maiden. Charlotte. Nathaniel continued.

    “Mother tried to talk to them and they almost… but then— ” He broke down into sobs, and Markus fell silent.

    As he passed the manor wall, he flung his hand and beat one of the grey ashlar blocks. His knuckles smarted but he didn’t care. Who were they? Why had they killed her? If he’d been home he could have stopped everything.

    Nathaniel mounted the path and jerked the double doors open. They slogged into the house. Nathaniel shut the door behind them. Markus followed him down the hall, the knot in his throat rising. Where was Mother? 

    Markus’s boots tread across the green and brown mosaic spread across the hallway. Behind him the roots of the tree stretched to the door, and before him, strong green branches sprouted in leaves. Each family member had a branch. Markus pinpointed his own branch. Right in the middle. 

    Something was different, though. The day after Father had been murdered, Hadel had accidentally dropped a hammer on Father’s branch. A crack ran across that tile. But now Markus noticed another crack. A crack on Estia’s branch. It couldn’t be a mistake. Someone had purposely broken it. He stared at it, desperately trying to keep his tears inside where they belonged.

    An arm wrapped around his shoulder and fragile hands pulled him into an embrace. Markus wrapped his arms around his mother. He sucked in his breath, but the tears spilled down his cheeks and into Mother’s hair. He choked them back, burying his face in Mother’s neck.

    “Hello, son.” Mother said. He took a deep breath and let it out. Markus lifted his head and brushed the tears away.  He stared at her shriveled face. Her shawl seemed too big for her thin frame and her hair was whiter than he remembered. He missed the scent of lemons and roses that used to hover around her. 

    Poor Mother. Was there anything I could have done? How could I be so selfish?

    “We were just having supper, Markus. We don’t have much, but please join us.”

    Markus took his mother’s hand and accompanied her down the hall. He stepped into the private dining room his family used when they didn’t have guests. He breathed in the smell of the hundreds of meals eaten there. Red and purple tapestries of heroic deeds done by Markus’s ancestors lined the walls. In the center, above the mantle, a painting had been hung. A painting that had been taken down ten years ago. Father’s painting. 

    Markus glanced at the table. 

    No centerpiece. No butter-server or silver plate or knife. Only three bowls and three spoons. Markus stared at his hands. Why would no one explain to him exactly what happened? Why hadn’t he been there to stop it?

    But he chose to depart. He chose to go with Grandfather. He chose to abandon Nathaniel to support Mother and Estia alone. 

    Markus replayed Grandfather’s words in his head. He has risen up again. He has already killed your father, Markus. Beware of him.

    He wandered to his seat at the table and rested his hands on his chair. Grandfather had been referring to Lord Kend. Those words had been spoken one day before Grandfather’s own death. Emil, the castle physician, publicly announced that he’d died of old age, but later he came to Markus privately. “Something in his wine was poisoned. Be careful with what you eat, Markus.” 

    Markus glanced down at his bowl. It was little more than warm water and a diced, shriveled-up carrot. Mother and Nathaniel would never poison him.

    “We’re better off than some. We get carrots for supper today.” Nathaniel’s eyes shone.

     Carrots? What about velvety soup with noodles and tender meat, heaps of vegetables? Several courses brought by the servants…

    Markus pulled his chair out. “Where are the servants?”

    Mother lifted her head. “We couldn’t afford to keep them.” 

    Food taken and taxes raised. That was the only explanation. Whoever did it was a tyrant. Suddenly Markus didn’t feel hungry. He shoved his chair in.

    “No one has done anything about this? Who rules this country?” He turned from the table and strode out the door, ignoring Mother and Nathaniel’s stares after him.

    Markus broke into the first door he saw, which happened to be the drawing room. He heard Nathaniel’s hurried footfalls behind him, but he flung the door closed. He just needed to get away for a minute. He spanned the room and collapsed on the couch.

    Edris must send an army after this man. Why hasn’t he done anything already? Markus sensed Nathaniel easing the door open and tip-toeing to situate himself across from him, but Markus fixed his gaze on the floor. 

    When Grandfather summoned him to go on the assignment, had he foreseen this? Markus met Nathaniel’s stare. “If Lord Kend did this, then I must ride to the castle at once to inform Edris.” 

    Nathaniel folded and unfolded his hands in his lap. “I tried informing his Highness already. Only a few days after you left me again.”

    I know I was selfish. You don’t have to pound it into me. “What did he say?” 

    “He didn’t say anything,” Nathaniel pronounced, and stared at the floor, fingering the Trojan horse around his neck.

    “What? Edris is a fool if he allowed injustice like this.”

    “You call your own friend a fool?”

    “Lord Kend killed my sister and my father. Edris is a fool if he can’t stand up for what’s right!”

    “King Edris is dead.” 

    What? Markus met Nathaniel’s eyes, but he envisioned Edris’s face. 

    “Goodbye,” A younger Markus said.

    “I will miss you, friend.” Edris had embraced him with tears in his eyes and then Markus had mounted his horse and cantered away.

    My dearest friend….dead? Markus tried to swallow the knot in his throat. Each time someone died, he felt as though pieces of his heart broke off and melted away. Father. Grandfather. Estia. Now Edris. One day his heart would be gone.

    A flood of tears threatened to pour down his cheeks but he forced them back. Lord Kend did this. The words echoed around his head until it ached. The tyrant! My family… Edris. Why? And he wasn’t there to save them. Why hadn’t he been home? Why had he chosen to leave? Why was he crying about a choice he could have controlled? 

    Markus rose from the armchair and shuffled to the bookcase beside the sofa, studying the titles. I never asked you to come in, Nathaniel. Markus tread down the length of the shelf and back again, trying to keep the knot in his throat from escaping. It was his fault.

     The quarrels they got into about the situation. Nathaniel’s pleas for him to cancel his trip before he rode off.

    Grandfather had offered to train Markus, not Nathaniel, and the opportunity for such a level of training was irresistible. But training is nothing compared to family. Nothing to seeing Estia one last time. Nothing to saving her from death.

    Markus jerked his arm across top of the bookshelf. A thud rattled on the floor. 

    He had to protect their family somehow. He was the head of the household. And he must protect his country and his people. Which meant he must get rid of Lord Kend. The full weight of responsibility entrenched his mind.

     Markus dusted his hands and bent to retrieve the item. He froze.

    With shaking hands, Markus plucked the toy from the wood tiles and fingered the wood. He remembered its soft feel again and its ridged limbs. Its twig-sword was thrust above its wooden marble head.  Father had carved the figure for them, along with the other nineteen. 

    Tears pricked Markus’ eyes. It was the wooden soldier he’d dropped that fateful night…

    “I warned you, Anrew.” Lord Kend tread toward Father, hand clenching his hilt. The grown-ups seemed frozen in place. Mother gripped Father’s shoulder. Young Markus squeezed his shoulders between the bars of the staircase. He clutched one of his twenty polished soldiers with one hand and the rail with the other. When would Father finish with Lord Kend so he could kiss him goodnight?

    “Lord Kend. You know I could never do such a loathsome act to Edris himself. The king is merely a lad.”

    “But Anrew. It must be done. Edris killed my own brother and stole what was rightfully mine and he will pay for it whether you help me or not. And I believe you have something else I need, as well…” 

    Markus leaned a little farther, but his sweaty fingers slipped off the edge. He gasped, pulling himself back onto the staircase. The wooden soldier tumbled out of his hand. It thudded on the mosaic floor. He held his breath. No one looked at him.

    “Please, Anrew, agree!” Mother whispered frantically. But it was too late. Father paled as Lord Kend unsheathed his sword and drove it into his stomach. Father doubled over and fell on his knees. Blood trickled where the point of the sword stuck out his back.

    All that came after was a blur. Screams. His heart breaking, shattering, falling to bits. Goblets clattering on the floor. The shutters swinging in the wind. Realization that Father would never kiss him goodnight again. Anger. 

    Father’s coffin lowered into the ground. The wooden box at the bottom of the hole. Mother kneeling beside the mound, sobbing, her black dress sweeping the dirt. The neighbors’ empty condolences. Walking away from the gravesite for the last time.

    Markus snapped his eyes shut and tore at his hair. Stop! Stop! He couldn’t think of that. Not now, not ever. Markus thrust the wooden figure on the shelf and reached for the arm of his chair to steady himself. 

    He wanted to kick the chair and smash it to pieces. If he could have run down the stairs and stabbed Lord Kend as he leapt out the window, none of this would have happened.“I’ll march my army.” Markus said to the wall. You won’t live long, Kend. When I’m done with this assignment, I’ll kill you.

  • Sailboats and Sharks

    Sailboats and Sharks

    Sailboats and Sharks image of sailboat

    A slightly exaggerated, partially true story.

    The phone is lying in the waterproof phone case.  The lid is open.  I glance up.  The phone’s going to get wet if I don’t close the phone case… I crawl onto the side of the yellow sailboat, barely wide enough for me to kneel on.  I edge my way to the front of the boat.  One hand at a time.  Right forward, then left, right, left… 

    I peer into the waves.  Dark, muddy waves.  Don’t fall in.   I lift my right hand.  I’m reaching for the lid, my hand at its full extent, brushing the edge of the container.  Suddenly, my left hand slides off the side of the boat.  My fingers rake the little sailboat’s side before I plunge into the water.

    I grip the front of my life jacket. My lungs are going to burst. As my bare feet touch the bottom of the lake, I see the earlier accounts of my day fly before me like a tape recorder unwinding.    


    “Here, Jubi.  You can take the rudder.  Lay it where those big rocks are.”  Daddy deposited the bulky apparatus into my arms.  While I toted it to a large flat rock on the edge of Lake Ray Roberts, Daddy hauled the mast out of the truck bed.  I peered across the water.  Looks a little dark… I wonder what swims in the water? Great whites with rows of sharp teeth?  20 foot killer whales?  I’d never been sailing before, and was a little nervous… Okay, to be honest, I was terrified of falling in the water.  I shuddered and hurried back to Daddy to assist in unloading.

    A few minutes later the various parts of the boat were leaning against the rocks. We assembled the boat and unfurled the sail.  Daddy beamed at me, his dimpled grin and dark eyebrows almost convincing me that sailing wasn’t so bad.   I cautiously stepped into the boat and sat down so my legs stopped wobbling.   

    A light warm breeze blew from the south.  The air smelled like water and pecan trees.  The Texas summer sun beat on our backs, but we didn’t care.  In other words, Daddy didn’t care because he was enjoying himself; I didn’t notice because I was staring endlessly at the water and gripping the side of the boat.  Sprays of cool water splashed from the stern. It had rained a few days before, so the water was muddy brown, but the sky was bright blue.  Our boat made ripples behind it as we sped along.  It was indeed the perfect day for enjoying one’s self.  

    After a while, I loosened my grip on the boat and listened while Daddy showcased various parts of the ship (two different parts, in fact; the rudder, and the boom). Daddy demonstrated steering the boat using the rudder.  When you turn the rudder, the boom swings over so the sail can catch the wind.  

    “You just have to make sure to duck when the boom swings or you’ll get hit in the head,”  he warned me.

    I grinned.  Sailing is effortless!  I decided to steer the rudder while Daddy worked the ropes that attached to the boom.  Soon, we were reclining in the boat, breathing in the beautiful day.

    After a peaceful hour, we steered toward shore.  We had sailed only a few hundred yards from the rocky outcrop when Daddy snapped his fingers.

    “Oh, shoot!  We forgot to take a picture!”  

    “Huh?”

    “We should have taken one back there when we were in the middle of the lake!”

    “Oh. Well we can take one now.”

    “Guess so.”  Daddy fumbled with the waterproof case that held the phone and keys.  I leaned over his shoulder.  He pulled out the phone and tapped the screen.  Large letters appeared across it: OVERHEATED.  

    “What should we do?”  I asked.

    “I’ll just leave it open so it can cool off before we get back.”

    “But Daddy, you shouldn’t.”

    “It’ll be fine.”

    “It’ll get wet!”

    “We’ll close it in just a minute.”  

    I sighed.  I almost let it go… but what if it got water-logged and damaged?  How would we contact Mommy if something happened?  And if the key’s battery case was damaged, our vehicle wouldn’t unlock.  I didn’t want to be stranded!  I forgot my fear of deep water as I made up my mind.  I had to close the phone case!   


    Back to the present, I bobbed to the surface.  The boat is already a few yards away.  I’m glad for my swimming lessons!  Daddy steers the boat towards me.  I scoop and kick with all my might.  He releases the rudder, extending his hand to help me up.  I scramble into the boat, dripping.  Whew!  I’m back on board!  

    CRRREEEAAAKKK!  

    Suddenly, the boom swings towards us.  Barely missing Daddy’s head, it flings the boat to one side.  We’re both hurled into the water.  I hit the waves and bob to the surface.  

    The boat has rolled over on its side.  Daddy reaches up and hangs on the wooden keel.  The top side of the boat lowers, then levels with a splash!  Daddy and I grip the side of the boat, ready to climb on.  And then we remember…

    “The phone.  And the keys.” Daddy searches the murky waters.

    “I told you to close the case!” 

    “Should I dive for them?”

    “No way!”  I pause and look up timidly. “Are… are there sharks in the water?”   Daddy eyebrows furrow.

    “You never know.”  He gazes into the distance.  “Pretend you’re in a boat and a shark is about to gobble you up.  How do you survive?” 

    I stare blankly at him. “Daddy, stop pretending,”  I whimper.  

    “Exactly!”   He laughs.  Huh?  How does that make…  Suddenly I burst out laughing.  Relief fills me as I realize: of course, there are no sharks in a lake! 

    Picture of shark black

    We returned to shore and loaded everything into the truck bed.  Then we strolled down the paved country road, laughing about our adventure.  So ends our adventure with sailboats and sharks. Or so I thought.

    We spotted two ladies swimming in a large blue pool behind a tall black fence.  Daddy explained our situation to them, and they gladly allowed our entrance.  He borrowed their phone and dialed Mommy’s number to ask her to come pick us up and bring the spare truck key.  While he called, I listened to the conversation between the women.  

    “Did they ever find out what happened to that poor man swimming in the lake?” asked one lady.

    “Yeah, they found his body at the bottom.  They say the only thing that could have made those bite marks is a shark.” The second lady waded to the edge of the pool.

    “My friend told me that her friend said she saw it.  She said her friend said it’s nearly fifty feet and it comes out every night!”  

    The second lady smirked. “What an exaggeration! But then again, more than one person’s gone missing since that man.”

    “Boy, I’m glad we have a pool!”

    The two ladies laughed.

  • Top 9 Books of 2024

    Top 9 Books of 2024

    Top 9 Books of 2024

    I read so many good books this year!  Maybe you’ve read these and maybe you haven’t, but here are my thoughts on my top 9 books of 2024.  I would give all these books at least 5 stars…. Ok, well at least 4.9999999999…

    Blood of Kings Trilogy by Jill Williamson ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

    A slave boy taken on by a knight suddenly begins to hear strange voices in his head. The duchess’s daughter disguises as a boy to escape her marriage to the evil prince.

    This is an action packed allegorical fantasy with themes of romance, coming of age, and doing what’s right.  

    One of my favorite books this year (obviously).  I feel like this genre can be so cliched, but Jill Williamson made this book fresh.  There is almost nothing I didn’t like about this book.

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    The Weeping Knight by Lauren Hildebrand

    ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

    “What must I do to be cleansed?”

    This is an allegory about a knight struggling with how to deal with his sin and be right before God.  So beautifully done!  The ending is the kind that makes your family wonder why you’re smiling. Read my book review here.

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    Lines of Courage by Jennifer Nielsen ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

    This is a historical fiction set during WWI and follows 5 teenagers of opposing countries as they learn the meaning of courage.

    The uniqueness! The move from character to character was almost flawless. This is the kind of book with an “Aha!” moment around the corner every chapter. Read my book review here.

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    Honey Butter by Millie Florence

    ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

    This is a middle grade contemporary with themes of friendship and sistership.  The sweetest sister book ever!

    I read this book for free by signing up to Millie’s email list, and only a few weeks later, I bought two copies to share with my younger sister and my girl cousins.  It was that good!  This is a great family read-aloud, and also a good book to read with your younger (or older) sister. Read my book review here.

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    The Ascendance Series by Jennifer Nielsen ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

    The crown prince is dead, and once word of the murder spreads, war will break out in Carthya and the surrounding countries.  One boy will be chosen to stop the devastating results.  And that boy must pretend to be the crown prince for the rest of his life.

    Jennifer Nielsen, through her unique main character, is literally the best at plot twists in this YA thriller fantasy.  Sage is so unique and his humor and tricks keep the story unpredictable as it progresses.  I’m just going to say, one of the twists blew my mind. Read my book review here.

    The Giver by Lois Lowry ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

    Jonas lives in a perfect world…or does he?

    This is a beautiful book filled with goodness, love, truth, and sacrifice.  It’s the first YA dystopian I’ve read, and I loved it so much.  Honestly, the first two sentences in this summary sum up what the book is.Williamson made this book fresh.  There is almost nothing I didn’t like about this book.

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    Cloak of the Light by Chuck Black

    ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

    Drew Carter begins to see things others can’t after a science experiment gone wrong. Surrounded by angels and targeted by demons, he faces an impossible challenge–how to save his country without losing his soul. 

    This modern-day spiritual warfare series is so amazing and so eye-opening!  The settings felt very realistic.

    Chuck Black values portraying good as good and evil as evil, and he does that very well in this book.  It reminds me of a quote…indeed, many of these books remind me of this quote: “There is some good in this world and it is worth fighting for.” Read my book review here.

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    Lord of the Rings by J.R.R Tolkien ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

    Lord of the Rings is priceless.  Guess why I decided to quote Tolkien in the previous paragraph?

    This year wasn’t the first year I read this book.  I was first introduced to the Lord of the Rings when I watched The Fellowship of the Ring at my friend’s birthday party.  I was confused about a lot of it and had lots of questions, but when I picked up the book, I was instantly a fan.  I have an entire Google doc of LotR memes. (If you ask really politely, I may share a few)

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    Do Hard Things by Brett and Alex Harris ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

    A teenage rebellion against low expectations.

    This book is a nonfiction that calls teens to take responsibility and rise up against the low expectations the world sets.

    I have never been more inspired by a non-fiction book. (other than the Bible)  I borrowed this book from a friend and later found my own copy.  The Harris brothers are so inspiring because not only are they encouraging other teens to rebel against low expectations, they’re actually doing it themselves!  

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    12 Editors Tackle 5 Major Flaws of Fiction by C.S. Lakin ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

    I couldn’t complete my list without including at least one writing book in the mix.  There are so many helpful tips in here!  I think this is my favorite writing book.  It’s especially helpful now that I’m in the editing stage of my novella.


    If you haven’t read these, go check them out!   If you have, and you loved them, tell me about it HERE. What are your Top 9 books of 2024? 

  • My Writing When I Was 10

    My Writing When I Was 10

    10-Year-Old-Me Writing Comparison: Anda and Philip

    Hello writers! I thought it would be fun to compare a story I wrote when I was 10 to the edited version. The version that sounds worse is 10-year-old me’s writing. Enjoy!

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    ORIGINAL

    The front of the yard was dotted with fruit trees, but the back was mostly an overgrown mass.  There was one hollow, odd-shaped sort of tree in front of the mass that was dead.  But the best part was being able to feel the wind-blown water splash on their faces from the river behind the fence.  The cousins wished they could swim in it.  The water looked so cool on hot summer days, but their mothers thought they weren’t old enough to go in such dangerous water.

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    Anda and Philip was the first novel that I completed…at 15K words. To give you context, the average Middle Grade novel contains about 30K words. I hope this encourages you that even if your book sounds really terrible right now, you will improve. You will get better if you keep practicing. See you next time!